Working on draft 3 of my novel, and am wondering... would a male masturbation scene be taking it too far? Would that cross a line that just would destroy the core of the plot?
Hard to say. Some people have already told me my novel is difficult to swallow. Yeah, I threw good taste out the window the second I started working on the last draft.
And what brought this thought on this raining morning over coffee?
Well to be honest, I'm still waiting for this weeks TNA Impact to be available so I can do the weekly review, and decided to work on one of the main characters while I wait. He needs to be given more personality. That and I had a crazy conversation last night with a buddy about an old match from the Best of the X-Division vol 2. (June 18th 2006 you can find it on iTunes even, 6 man contenders match)
My editor and my friend's mom who read the last draft both feel he's the strongest character in my novel. My Antagonist. My Heel. So now I am just trying to get a better handle on this character, so to speak.